Blog #11

Today we incorporated a topic sentence in our position paper. In class we had enough time to discuss, from the book, how to form a topic sentence. However we did not have enough time to work on the assignment in class. In class I knew I was going to work on the topic sentence for my first body paragraph. My first body paragraph is about comparing actual rape to a rape in Second Life. In class I thought about opening with a question.

On my rough draft I ended up using a question as my topic sentence. My topic sentence went as follows, "How is an avatar able to rape another avatar." I do not think this is a good topic sentence I know it needs some revisions. I think I am going to change the topic sentence above in to a statement instead of a question. Then follow up with that same question latter ing the paragraph. The classroom experience went very well today.